The final line, the pit of ash beneath our tongues, is a distinctive metaphor in that I believe it to not only represent the residue of atomic fires, but also the inescapable legacy that had been passed down, which is indisputably the objectionable usage of the devastating bomb. Symbolism also helps share Gallaghers perspective on the war. The line our teacher joining in symbolises how even adults celebrated the event by having fun, something which they would not have been able to do for many years. This generates a sense of jubilance, and combined with Gallagher effectively positioning the reader as though they are actually in the situation themselves, World War 2 ended and celebrations everywhere, the reader can understand how joyous people were when the war was finally declared over. With the poem being written in first person, weve won and The bomb entered our conversation, Gallagher also uses personification in the lines The bomb entered our conversation, a stranger who refused to leave, to clearly convey that the bomb is unwanted, a symbol of guilt and fear, by making it personal with the reader.
Whilst this effectively reflects her personal attitudes towards the war, remorse and acceptance, the reader also starts to question their own attitude towards the war. However, it is the juxtaposition within the layers of the poem that most entices the readers attention. The sharp contrast between the cheerful and happy celebrations that the war was over, to the suddenly sombre tone that comes with the realisation of the deaths that were the price of war combined with the existence of the atomic bomb which spreads fear. It effectively engineers turmoil within the reader. With no rhythm or rhyming scheme within the poem, the poem is a free-verse, following the rhythm of natural speech with no consistent meter patterns. Thus, Gallagher uses precise language and strong phrasing in order to get her point across quickly and concisely, such as the lines Japan bombed, gigantic clouds curling, skies burnt scarlet -total destruction . . . and The War over.
This short, sharp rhythm is very effective as it doesnt let the readers mind wander from the point, thereby successfully demanding the readers attention at all times. Tatsuya Shiihara English Poetry Year 11 Term 2 Semester 1 2014 1 Poem Annotation The Last War There was only one war, and it was finishing any day soon. Ears keyed to the wireless, we waited. Then the news: Japan bombed, gigantic clouds curling, skies burnt scarlet total destruction . . . Weve won, weve won, a conga-chant round the schoolground, beating tins, sticks: our teacher joining in flags, jumbled cries uncles and cousins coming back. The war over. Hiroshima, Nagasaki ghost towns now. Over two hundred thousand people ghosts too. We couldnt imagine it. The bomb entered our conversation, a stranger who refused to leave.
Only years on did we become aware of the pit of ash beneath our tongues. Katherine Gallagher Taken From http://www.poetrylibrary.edu.au/poets/gallagher-katherine/the-last-war-0646045 Comment [u1]: Symbolic represents the anticipation that everyone had waiting to hear the news that the war had ended therefore the suffering and death as well had ended. Comment [u2]: Symbolic represents that this Comment [u3]: Short, sharp rhythm gets straight to the point instead of wandering, doesnt let readers mind wander from the point. Comment [u4]: Symbolic represents that there was nearly nothing left after the explosion, everything had been decimated.
Comment [u5]: Symbolic represents the jubilance felt by those who were relieved that the war had ended, generating a sense of relief Comment [u6]: Symbolic represents how even the adults celebrated the event by having a little fun something they had not been able to do for many years. Comment [u7]: Symbolic- represents how separated families got back together after the war Comment [u8]: Symbolic represents how the cities were literally empty no, with nothing at all left untouched. Comment [u9]: Symbolic represents that how many people were lost Comment [u10]: Symbolic represents how, in the countries that won after the war, as the people there could not feel the direct effects of how the war was ended (atomic bomb), and no-one could imagine it, people celebrated, instead of mourned.
Comment [u11]: Juxtaposition sharp contrast from cheerful and happy that the war was over to suddenly a sombre tone that was full of guilt and sadness. Comment [u12]: First person generates a point of view of the poet Comment [u13]: Symbolic represents the guilt that was felt for having to decimate over 200000 people in order to win this war and the fear because of the atomic bomb existing Comment [u14]: Personification human nature Comment [u15]: Symbolic represents how, only after the people of the winning countries realised the extent of the ¦ Comment [u16]: Metaphor represents the never-ending guilt over the destruction caused. Comment [u17]: No rhyming pattern detected Comment [u18]: Structured to be like a story, many symbolic words and phrases. Comment [u19]: * English Poetry Analysis Commentary * Official draft